Title: Cheater
Inuyasha_83 - October 5, 2003 01:49 AM (GMT)
Cheater
Eat my flesh
Soak my bones
Talk all day
And break the phone
Things are strange with much amiss
Rip my lips and steal a kiss
Drink some blood
Quench your thrist
Get your fill
And watch me burst
Kill the hope
Tear the heart
Say good bye
And then we'll part
Ron no Anime - October 6, 2003 06:05 AM (GMT)
... interesting... I think you feel betrayal... *pat Inu's shoulder* Great poetry and work!!!
FoX - October 6, 2003 10:28 PM (GMT)
That was touching. Great job.
ou812 - October 6, 2003 11:03 PM (GMT)
that was cool send it to Rob Zombie and let him turn it into a song
Hailin - October 7, 2003 02:06 AM (GMT)
kool, so interesting, i like it!!
Inuyasha_83 - October 13, 2003 04:57 AM (GMT)
Thanks everyone I've got one that I'm going to post here in a few minutes. BTW I don't think that Rob Zombie would take my poem as a song but thanks
Angel Of The Dawn - October 29, 2003 02:03 AM (GMT)
Whoa, Yes That Is Very Interestin But & It Is Good Work/Description.
