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crazdfeline - August 25, 2003 12:04 AM (GMT)
Freedom in a Ride

Wind in my hair, looking out at the sea
So this is what its like to be free
Its simple heaven when riding the tide
Don’t ever know how the ocean with lie
Son on my shoulders sharing its rays
Sitting, relaxing, enjoying the day
What is better than a day like this,
Gliding on the ocean in perfect bliss

Doubts

Is this meant to last,
Or is it bound to end?
Will this never pass
Or will we just be friends?
Will we last forever?
Will you feel the same tomorrow?
Will you fall in one endeavor?
Will my life fall in shadows?
I know I doubt, I’m sorry I do
I just need some proof, some clue

But I see it then and in you I trust
That you won’t let me fall into a bust
That leaves me paralyzed and hurt
In pain, soon to be buried in the dirt.



Starwarriorzero - August 26, 2003 03:18 PM (GMT)
Very good as usual, you got loads of talent.

~DarkWolf~ - August 26, 2003 03:22 PM (GMT)
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo......*gives dreamy eyes* (ok i'm sleepy cuz i didn't get much sleep last night....and i like poems...) pretty.......i like them.........*falls asleep on the key borad*

Ron no Anime - August 28, 2003 02:37 AM (GMT)
Very good poem!!! :)

Angel Of The Dawn - August 30, 2003 05:33 PM (GMT)
*huggs* very good very very good! I like em! aww! keep up the great work. *sniffles a bit* that one... "Doubts" is great...*criesI* its really good I like it alot so much.




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