http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=1063615&t=4856

hope you digg

i did all music, my friend came up to oswego to lay down vox... pretty much 1 take on vox... guitars arent in time at some parts but you need a good hear to hear it... ive gotten nothing but good reviews for the song from friends... and I even asked one of the kids I knew back in highschool who plays guitar if he would be interested in starting a melo bm band, he said yes... so hoepfulyl you all enjoy...

the song is far from finished... im gonna do the guitars over, and there are some riffs im gonna change... all the rhythm is there and it is missing leads, solo, harmony solo at the end that would fade out with everything, and I just didnt edit the ending at all... I think I fucked up the last minute or 30 secs but ohwell... hope you guys dig...

and theres some dimmu covers there aswell

I think you are your own critic Ralph. From the way you described the song I was expecting something far more amatuerish. But the whole thing sounds very proffessional. Something Metffan and friends could inspire too. :metal2: :metal2:

Production was good. I can understand about the song not being finished. For awhile when writing a song sometimes i feel like changing this or that or whatever just trying to find the right mix of things to make the song work .

lol thanks a bunch, it sounds professional cause I do production for radio and have an idea on how to make things sound good. I still need to read up on music recording and stuff... and its funny its recorded through a computer mic, except the vox which were recorded in my prod studio... ummm, but I didnt even wanna post it till I finished but I never hooked my computer up so I wasnt able to record/edit so i figure I might as well show everyone now... the next time you hear it, it will sound different... hopefully way more professional. but I have some ideas on what to change, including the guitar riff in the middle backed by violin... i think Im gonna just make it striaght chords... but Ill see about things when I get my computer set up at school and see how shit sounds on midi

well technically the song was finished... besides solo which I tabbed the foundation to a solo.. the midi version of the song is technically finished... its just the fact that i need to record everything and edit it in which Ive been lazy... but once I am done with this song, its on to tabbing/completing the other songs Im working on and then recording those... I hope to have 2 other tabs completed before the semester is over... then recorded

Gotta say that's sounding rather good for just a rough demo thing. A hell of a lot of potential here i do believe.

nice ralph nice,. Great song, imo. Production is very good for your own recording, and the guitars are very black metallish.

Hey Janez maybe you and Metffan could offer some extra guitars to round it out a bit more. :laugh:

yea...

I was hoping this was gonna be by metffan.

This is superb. Keep it up, you got some great talent there. Spread the music everywhere.