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Title: Can Anyone Crit One Of My Composition?
Description: In Powertab + MIDI Format.


Seth Shadows - July 9, 2007 05:58 PM (GMT)
Download SaviorPart1.ptb

Part one of my 2 Part Story.

It's not finished and Still has alot of bugs. Especially The Lead Guitar Solo.

Id Love A Crit or two If you can take 10 minutes out of your time.

If you dont have POWERTAB Software Installed on your computer The URL is: http://www.download.com/Power-Tab-Editor/3...4-10502035.html

Download, Install, Open and Click the play button.

Thanks.

Seth Sanders.

lookralphsbak - July 9, 2007 10:07 PM (GMT)
how about you export them as midi then send them... I use tabit so I wont download powertab.

Seth Shadows - July 9, 2007 11:06 PM (GMT)
Download SaviorPart1.mid

MIDI.
Thanks Alot. =)

lookralphsbak - July 10, 2007 07:50 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Seth Shadows @ Jul 9 2007, 06:06 PM)
Download SaviorPart1.mid

MIDI.
Thanks Alot. =)

first impression: 10 mins! wtf this better be EPIC or keep me interested. I love long songs...

First riff- that sounds like something as I lay dying would write...

and one of the riffs sounds like a doom theme or something... one of those midi theme songs or level songs from a video game

this song is all over the place, I dont think i dig the transitions between riffs or solos... and the solo to solo to harmony solo to watever is way too long, im sure if it was real guitar recording it would be cool but in midi its just like too many notes played in a long period of time

and its only part 1? theres more?!

Seth Shadows - July 11, 2007 04:54 PM (GMT)
Hey, Thanks for the Crit.
It's alot different on actual guitar. And when you can see the rehersal signs =P.
Without words it is veryyy boring.

Part 2 Is all acoustic and focuses on mainly vocals. With no Gutter/Growing Vocals.




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